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Descriptive writing

This student was asked to write a story of 100 words only which included these 5 words… dragon, night, cloud, apple, scared


“At night he slept a little, sometimes his parents come over at night to have dinner. The next day, it was a cloudy day, so he stayed at home. Later in the day when the sun came out, he did some gardening. He planted his second apple tree. After lunch, he went to his friends house to play Dragon ball. He lost the game 10 -8 he was sad but happy because he only lost buy two”


The student was given feedback about reading through his work to make sure it makes sense, and the use of apostrophes.